Water slide at Mangawhai heads

Zipping down the black water slide I see a pool of water awaking me at the bottom of the slide. It gets closer and closer till its right there, With a blink of an eye I enter the world of the unknown then I pop out of the darkness and enter a world of brightness and life. I hop down the stairs and run up the grassy hill and up the stairs. I wait in the line until I'm nearly at the front. Now I look down at the pool I entered earlier. I shut my eyes and push of the deck and form into a rocket formation and that makes me even faster.when I open my eyes I'm half way down. So I start to prepare for the big impact of me and the water.But at that moment I get side tract and watch Dion zip down the flying fox then without knowing I smash the water send foam fly everywhere.

Wellington H2O

Wellington H20 extreme

Arriving on a damp morning we wait in line to get our pass into the water park . We get our passes and head to the changing room. Once we were done we ran into the heated pool ,then we head for the river rush. We felt a small current as we swam through waist deep water.

We were at the entrance the current got so strong that my cousin got whipped in the current and dragged down stream the out of sight but i managed to grab onto a hand pole right in the strong bit of the current. Then out of nowhere my cousin came and knocked my place i zip down around the corner.There was another problem waves started as well as the current got way stronger. You couldn’t get out the only way was to grab onto the side and move our way up .finally I made it just in time for the slides to open.

                   The End

Elliott’s mark 5/5

My Mark 4/5

                       Total 9/10

Halloween Scare

Helloween Horror

The Great White House

Part:1

Characters: Blake hay and Jayden

Location:Great white house

Dozing in blackness,Blake and I hear an awful scream and the sound of a drill coming for the next door neighbor's house. We look out into the night searching for clues then in the direction of where we heard the scream we see lights flashing on and off  in the reflection we see a shape of a clown but it’s quite hard to make out the shape because bloods covering the curtains. Then all of a sudden the drilling stops and then out of nowhere a face comes out of the window.We run downstairs calling for our parent but there’s no answer so we run into their room and find they’ve been stabbed to death by something or someone. Then on our way back up to bed we hear the gate  creak open and then shut again we look out of the window and see the clown jogging toward the house.We decide who will go down but none of us want to because we're to scared. Then we hear the front door swing open and shut then we hear footsteps coming up the stairs then all of a sudden they stop and then we hear groaning coming from the parents room then we hear two more sets of footsteps come up the stairs then all of a sudden the door breaks open and starts walking towards blake and grabs hold of him and starts dragging him into the darkness noise then I see Blake he seems normal then he falls to the ground screaming in agony then he disappears. Then all of a sudden he appears again but he has sharp teeth and then he turns into a bat and starts chasing me around I run crazy around the house then I see sunlight.Then I hear Blake the vampire scream and then he turns back to his normal self and falls to the ground I carry him up to bed. Then his eyes open slowly he asks me “What happened?”in a sick voice I say you turned into a vampire and chased me round that makes him laugh. “Thank god that’s over”.

Make shore that you check out the next issue No 2 by Blake Hay:)